Wild Living

Struck down,
she does not move.
Her shock of green hair
tumbles across her face,
lithe limbs akimbo.

Across the small
of her back

Susan ♥ Larry
Susan
♥ Jake
Susan
♥ Vince

.
Tramp stamps
on an organ donor
oak.

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8 thoughts on “Wild Living

  1. That is one sinister scene – I can see it – sends shivers up my spine and the detail of the tattoos is sheer genius – the last stanza is chilling and opens up a whole other story…

  2. Oh, it is layered – had to read it twice to fully grasp the meaning! Love it. Personally, though, I’d leave out “soon to be” to make that line so much more powerful.

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