Gather
to yourself
memory of the wind,
its curve about your face,
long reach across the prairie.
Note its tone by the length
of the grass. Earth the instrument
bends blue with the long wail
of distance, the brush of sunlight
on the atmosphere and the swirl of liquid stone
far beneath our feet. The most solid among us
moves with a stirring breath,
flows in pulsing tides,
holds a hidden charge of electrons in flux
we scarcely know ourselves.
We carry Whitman’s teeming multitudes within us
and bend with the solitary figure behind a bedroom door
scribbling metaphoric messages
to some unknown emissary
of the wind.
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For dVerse Poets’ Pub Open Link Night #44
Simply beautiful…. x
Stunning poem, Matt đŸ™‚
This is incredibly beautiful.
Simply fascinating to read – your words .ebb like the wind and the tide – “The most solid among us
moves with a stirring breath,
flows in pulsing tides, … very inspiring write.
nice…those last five lines are my fav…ha…send them out to the wind that it might carry them where they are needed i say…smiles.
very cool, loved the ending.
I’ve often given my secrets to the wind… letting go is sometimes so liberating.
Lovely prose!
This poem had an almost physical sense of refreshment for me, Matt–refresh the screen, the brain, look again, things are so obvious, yet also so not what they seem on a casual fumble through. The opening is literally like a sensation of cool wind, and from ‘Earth the instrument’ on, full of one superb visual after another…anyway, not to keep gushing on, I liked it.
Will you be my agent? đŸ˜€
nice, nice, nice…the earth as an instrument…love the movement and vibrancy in this matt
That wind blowing across the prairie certainly holds some magic. An uplifting poem!
I specially like the opening lines…this is lovely ~
Beautiful!
This is a delicious poem. These are my favorites:
“Gather to yourself memory of the wind, its curve about your face”
“Note its tone by the length of the grass.”
“liquid stone … The most solid among us
moves with a stirring breath”
oh my, this is fabulous. i can’t even pick a favorite line, i love them all!
I loved this poem about one if my favorite subject’s ~ wind ~ most richly done ~ it’s movement & it’s calm ~ stillness
…the wind,
it’s curve about your face….
it reaches and lifts
me up
and draws me near
to listen closer
as your wind
tickles my mind
in words
beautiful imagery :~)
just totally awesome
Like a fresh breeze on a muggy day, this piece…lovely!
A great poem. … love the opening lines
I love the first lines, picture arms spread wide to draw the wind close before it passes by. Beautiful images here.
Nature melded into the reference of Whitman – leaves, land, texture – all enhance the meaning and the feel of this poem. So natural it becomes one with the reader as soon as it’s read.
Great classical flow. Would read nice with a lone cello cloaked in breeze on a hill.
I’d comment, but I have nothing to add….
This just flows so gently – refreshing the spirits
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